1. I will work on the "So What"
2. I will help connect ideas in what is going on in my story for the reader to gain personal insight and understand without having to work too hard
3. I will work on making "hyperlinks" so with heavily packed areas with information the reader can come to understand some things through all the activities going on.
Edit:
1. I will work on commas with FANBOYS.
2. I will work on specifics- no things, its, etc.
3. Work on transitions between ideas.
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